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英语习作2(七年级)
发布日期: 2016-03-22 16:10 作者: 浏览次数:

My Favourite City

(一)

Born in Shanghai, I am a genuine Shanghainese. And my favourite city is Shanghai.

Shanghai has been developing rapidly these years. It’s now one of the major metropolises over the world. People here are kind and hospitable. Apart from this, Shanghai has better education and offers greater opportunities to those who intend to make a difference. Located on the Pacific coastline, Shanghai takes in thousands of tons of imported goods, as well as different cultural perspectives. Most importantly, Shanghai is my hometown. Ever since I was a child, it’s been collecting my memories which are deeply buried in my heart.

Shanghai, a city endowed with charm is worth my love.

教师点评:

作者围绕“我最喜爱的城市”的主题阐述了上海的经济发展、城市的人文关怀、以及作者本人对这个城市的情感。

全文层次分明,表达流畅,词语丰富,句型结构多样,可见作者有较强的语言表达能力。比如“metropoliseshospitable”等词汇,以及现在完成进行时,定语从句等句型的正确使用,使文章增色不少。

 

(二)

I’ve been to many cities in China, among them, I like Taipei best.

    Taipei is in the south of China, it has an area of 271.8 square kilometres, and the population is over two million. The local food is very delicious and delicate, such as noodles, dumplings and sushi. Besides, there are lots of places of historical interest, like the Palace Museum, the 101 Building and so on. In addition, the locals are very friendly to the tourists, and they’re always glad to give people a hand. Most importantly, we belong to the same nation with the same culture and custom, and we don’t need to worry about language communication.

Taipei is a modern city with culture and tradition,  it is also a city full of friendliness, so Taipei is my favourite city.

教师点评:文章从各个方面介绍台北,重点在对当地民风的评述。“we belong to the same nation with the same culture and custom”表明了小作者对海峡两岸文化同源的思考,使台北这座城市让人感觉更亲切。

 

(三)

There is an amazing city on Hainan Island. Once you go, you will never forget it!

The first time I visited it, I was really amazed at the unforgettable scenery. The golden beach was surrounded by innumerable coconut trees. The blue sea seemed endless, and the air was fresher than that in any other place in China.

As a foodie, I really enjoyed eating coconuts and bananas there. As a swimming lover, I had a wonderful time in the sea. As a creative teenager, I made a lot of sandcastles there. In my eyes, it is really a paradise on the earth.

Yes, as you can see, this amazing city is Sanya—my favourite city. I love this wonderful city for all the joy it gives me, and I believe it will remain in my heart forever.

教师点评: 本文文笔细腻,语言优美,感情丰富,构思巧妙。一开头并没有直接点出最喜欢的城市,而是从自己的旅游经历入手,抓住“favourite, 娓娓道来,令人印象深刻。

 

(四)

Have you been to Singapore? That is my favourite city. I went there when I was 8 years old. It is such an unforgettable city that I would like to introduce it to you. 

Singapore is in the southeast of Asia. It is also named “Lion City”. It is said that a monster which has a head like a lion and a body like a fish once saved the city!

Singapore is a garden city. You may see green plants, blue sky and clean streets everywhere. The air is fresh and the surroundings are really beautiful.

Singapore is a tourist city. It has a lot of tourist attractions, such as Sentosa, Singapore Zoo, Jurong Bird Park and so on. They are must-sees for you!

What’s more, Singapore is also a city of typical southeastern style. There are a lot of delicious food from India, Indonesia, Malaysia and other southeastern countries. When you go there, don’t miss the tasty food!

What a dreamlike and beautiful city! I love Singapore.

教师点评: 小作者用一种与读者对话的语气,采用总分总的结构,从四个方面描写了最喜爱的城市——新加坡,条理清晰,语言通顺。

 

(五)

Nowadays, many people live in a fast pace, so they are eager to find a place to relieve stress. I think the best choice is Chengdu, “the Land of Abundance”.

During the summer holiday, our family went on a five-day trip to Chengdu, and it brought us much pleasure and enjoyment.

Eating hot pot and Chuan food is the must-do thing when you visit Chengdu. Hot pot lovers might be very addictive to the spicy food until they have runny-nose and watery-eyes. Besides, Chengdu has various local snacks, such as Dandan noodles, Bobo chickens and boiled dumplings.

What’s more, Chengdu has a long history, and many places of historical interests are well protected. For example, the Dufu’s Thatched Cottage was rebuilt in honor of the realistic poet.

For sure, the lovable pandas are the symbol of Chengdu. With a winning appearance, pandas catch visitors’ eyes throughout the world. No wonder they are national treasure of China!

All in all, life in Chengdu is relaxing and abundant. I love Chengdu!

教师点评: 本文作者通过自己的旅游经历展示了她眼中的“a Land of Abundance”——天府之国成都。文章从美食、美景和珍稀动物三个方面进行介绍,突出了成都悠闲又丰富多彩的生活。特别是对火锅食客的描写“runny-nose and watery-eyes”,栩栩如生。小作者善于观察思考,能较好地运用课外积累的词汇句型,英语表达流畅地道。

 

 

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